I believe our answers "tell" as my freshman English professor at Cornell, Scott Elledge, always said. Of course, he received his enlightenment from none other than E.B. White who wrote The Elements of Style and preached the following wonderful advice.....
"17. Omit needless words.
Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all sentences short, or avoid all detail and treat subjects only in outline, but that every word tell."
(from The Elements of Style by Strunk and White)
The Writing Challenge requests answers to the following prompts:
And here are mine.....
You're feeling: uncertain
And here are mine.....
You're feeling: uncertain
On your mind: my parents
What you ate last night: penne with spicy sausage (delicious)
You Sometimes Find it Hard To: gain perspective
The Weather: cloudy and cool.
Something You Have a Collection of: miniature tea sets
A Smell that Cheers You Up: hot-from-the-oven cookies
A Smell that Can Ruin Your Mood: cat shit
How Long Since You Last Shaved: none of ur business (face or legs?)
Your Hair Right Now: like Don King's
The Largest Item on Your Work Space Right Now (besides computer): bowl of Easter candy
Your Skill with Chopsticks: sux
Which Section You Head to First in the Bookstore: new paperback fiction
After That?: spirituality
Something You're Craving: an end to insomnia
Your General Thoughts on the Presidential Race: scary, exciting
How Many Times you've been hospitalized this year: none (day surgery doesn't count)
A Favorite Place to Go for a Quiet Time: Tully's in Magnolia
You've Always Secretly Thought You'd be a Good: urologist
Something that Freaks You Out a Little: (a little is what's getting me)....my gas fireplace
Something You've Eaten too Much of Lately: cookies
You Have Never: been to India
Never Want To: skydive
You Sometimes Find it Hard To: gain perspective
The Weather: cloudy and cool.
Something You Have a Collection of: miniature tea sets
A Smell that Cheers You Up: hot-from-the-oven cookies
A Smell that Can Ruin Your Mood: cat shit
How Long Since You Last Shaved: none of ur business (face or legs?)
Your Hair Right Now: like Don King's
The Largest Item on Your Work Space Right Now (besides computer): bowl of Easter candy
Your Skill with Chopsticks: sux
Which Section You Head to First in the Bookstore: new paperback fiction
After That?: spirituality
Something You're Craving: an end to insomnia
Your General Thoughts on the Presidential Race: scary, exciting
How Many Times you've been hospitalized this year: none (day surgery doesn't count)
A Favorite Place to Go for a Quiet Time: Tully's in Magnolia
You've Always Secretly Thought You'd be a Good: urologist
Something that Freaks You Out a Little: (a little is what's getting me)....my gas fireplace
Something You've Eaten too Much of Lately: cookies
You Have Never: been to India
Never Want To: skydive
To all; have a good day and if you have a chance, surf the blogosphere and stay ahead of that pesky wave.
I laughed and nodded in agreement to your answers! I have been eating too much ice cream - but I'm sure if I had cookies in the house - they wouldn't last long... I keep hearing about your insomnia, I take ambien every night - we should talk...I just started the sleep clinic at Swedish.
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